2007年5月7日 星期一
Compare and contrast living at home and dormitory. (1)
I have left home town for studying since I was a collage student. And I have been living at the dormitory and the apartment with my classmates for 7 years. There are some differences between living at home and dormitory. The advantage of living at home is that I have my own space to do anything I want to without any disturbance, and I can eat many delicious meal my mother made. Also, I don't have to do the laundry and pay for the rent. I could avoid getting wet in the rain by driving parents' cars, if it rains heavily. In contrast with living at the dormitory, I live with 6 roommates in a small area where studying, sleeping and playing together. At meal time, I go to school restaurant every day; I have eat each of stors' food more than 10 times. And I have to wash clothes by myself.
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I think you like living at home, right? In the article, you mentioned the advantage about living at home and the disadvantage about living in dorm. Maybe you can try another way. Say something good in dorm or bad things at home.
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I can see the advatages that you feel about living at home and disadvatages about living in the dormitory, but can you try to organize all of these sentences become one or two topic sentences in the beginning or make the conclusion in the end for your paragraph. I think it will make your paragraph more clear.
Enjoy to read your paragraph!
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