2007年5月28日 星期一
The Effects of an Invention or Innovation in Modern Life. (1)
In the ancient time, when the weather was hot, we used the fan to let us feel more comfortable by vibrating our own hands. But in the modern life now, there is an great inversion that has revolutionized the way we behave today which is called "air conditioner." It is so easy and convenient that we just need to insert the connector and click some buttons, then the cold air will come out the machine. Air conditioners have been existed in everywhere, such as homesites, schools, and skyscrapers. We cannot live and feel annoyed without air conditioners especially in summer. Beside the cold air, there are many modes we can choose what we need. For instant, we can select the eliminates wet mode when the weather is wet; it will have a good dream when selecting the comfortable sleeping mode.
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I think you want to support that the air condiction is easy to use and convenient. In your assignment, I couldn't understand that "the cold air will come out the machine", maybe your might add some conjunction, like "from". (the cold air will come out from the machine). Beside, I think you do not finish your assignment yet, you can finish it quickly.
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I think air conditioner really affected our life. Especially in Taiwan, the weather is extremely hot in summer. I can't imagine life without them.
1. About your sentence 'in the modern life now, there is an great inversion that has revolutionized the way we behave today which is called "air conditioner."', the word 'inversion', what's the meaning of it? Or do you mean the word 'invention'.
2. I think you can write more about the effects of air conditioners. As I know there are many disadvantages of air conditioners too. For example, the effects of greenhouse gas.
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